Nice story Jordan. Perhaps Tim's owner should leave some toys for him to play with so he does not get bored. Do you think Turtles could play with toys?
Well done Jordan for sticking at this and sharing your ideas with me. Next time we will look to put more describing words in so the reader gets more information. Maybe also we could write 6 lines.
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Nice story Jordan. Perhaps Tim's owner should leave some toys for him to play with so he does not get bored. Do you think Turtles could play with toys?
Well done Jordan for sticking at this and sharing your ideas with me. Next time we will look to put more describing words in so the reader gets more information. Maybe also we could write 6 lines.
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